Free Essay On The Assignment Which Is Analyzed Is “How English Colonies Treated Native Americans”.

Analysis of Sentence of Previous Writing Assignment

Avoid syntax errors:
Most of the text in the above work has syntax errors. In syntax writing, separate sentences are combined by rules of grammar. Most of the sentences are not linked by the right grammatical connection and hence it is difficult to understand. Punctuations are missing at the right places. The other thing I noticed is that, most of my sentences begin with prepositions like ‘with’. So it is very difficult for the reader to determine the head of the sentence and phrase of the sentence. There are no jargons in this text. However, certain words in the sentence fall of the bridge or are not forming part of the sentence.

Avoid wordy phrases:

The sentences have lot of wordy phases. Very often it is difficult to understand the pattern of sentences in a paragraph. When looking at the connected sentences they look dissimilar, but are similar. Most of the sentences have many interpretations and it is not clear what the author wants to tell. There is lot of grammatical error in the document. Ambiguity is noticed in the sentence structure. The preposition in the sentence is repeated more than once. Most of the sentences are very complex and making them simple will make understanding easy. Many a times the complement phrase is introduced without the right preposition or punctuation. Complementisers like ‘that’ or ‘which’ can improve the sentence structure. The orders of words, in most sentences, are wrong. Like wise the rule of transformation in a sentence are not adhered to. Always a verb should be followed by a pronoun, and not the vise versa.
P.S: Examples and ideas are noted as comments and track changes in the attached document.