Good Example Of Article Review On Lta

Tonya’s Document: Implementation, Strategic Controls, and Contingency Plans

Positives
1. The content of the document is impressive. Tonya has done a remarkable job in collecting the information for the document.
2. The style of language and the use of vocabulary are impressive. There were no grammatical confusions.

Challenges

1. The organization of the charts and tables are uneven.
2. The formatting and use of colors are a big drawback for this document.

Why should the document be revised?

There are two different fonts used in the document; any professional document uses one font and the recommended fonts are Times New Roman or Arial.
The use of bright colors on the tables can cause seizures and light colors on charts won’t be particularly visible when they are printed out or projected.

The document has a conclusion heading with no content and leaves room for speculation.

The text size in the WordArt graphics are too small to read with ease.
The tables and charts are arranged separately with no corresponding text or reference. This type of representation hinders the flow of the document.

Brian’s Document: Thunder Studios Strategic Plan

Positives
1. Use of graphs.
2. Use of vocabulary and lack of grammatical mistakes.
Challenges
1. The document only had graphs and WordArt; there was a very small portion of text.
2. The formatting and organization of the data was very poor.

Why should the document be revised?

Strategic Priority chart is confusing; it is difficult to read since the text has been squeezed. The best way to work such relational charts is by using MS Visio and importing that to MS Word.
There are two different fonts used in the document and in different sizes too; any professional document uses one font and the recommended fonts are Times New Roman or Arial. The recommended font size for any document is 12 points.
There is no text in the document barring the introduction. It resembles a presentation on MS Word.

Extensive dependence of graphic representation disoriented the structure of the document.

Charts spreading across pages creating ambiguity on whether they belonged on the page at all.
Use of bright colors can cause seizures.
Kim’s Document: Regis Corporation Implementation Plan
Positives
1. The document was well balanced with data and graphical representation.
2. There was a free flow of information throughout the document.
Challenges
1. There were too many spelling/typo errors in the paper.
2. The graphs sported a different font.
Why should the document be revised?
There were two different fonts used in the document. The text was completely in Times New Roman however the graphs were in a different font. It is recommended that the document have a uniform font.
There were a large number of spelling/typo errors in the document. It can be quite irritating to notice so many of them while reading. These are careless mistakes and will not go unnoticed despite the excellent formatting of the document.
The WordArt colors were uniform however; the light blue shade does not provide adequate prominence to the text in the list boxes that were used. Always use a darker shade of color for the font if the box is going to be a light shaded color.